This feedback builds on comprehension of key
issues and gives specific ideas for improving performance in a related context. The following statements are typical of this level.

Taking time to practice your presentation can
help you deliver your message in a confident
and convincing tone.
The introduction should highlight a single hypothesis and explain why it is justified.
By focusing on the goal of good technical communication, rather than focusing simply on the score, the team reminded everyone about
the educational objective of the project.